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One Intense Evening
Author: Psycho Lotus
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(Added on May 25, 2005)
(This month 48485 readers) (Total 59388 readers) |
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A housewife makes the mistake of refusing her Master's sexual advances. Now she has to pay. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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nicely done (8/10)
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Reviewer:
rce
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Jun 3, 2005 |
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I agree with the previous reviewers. I like short stories like this, where you do not have to wait for a sequel. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
Ruby
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May 28, 2005 |
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Fun little story, with lots of pain, bondage and excitement. When she was scared, I was scared with her. The visuals were excellent and I enjoyed her master taking control. An editing refresh would pop this up a notch in ratings. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
pinto
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May 26, 2005 |
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good story line (8/10)
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Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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May 26, 2005 |
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Wow, a very busy evening. You have a few typos and misused words a proper proof reading would help. , but the intensity of your story more than makes up for these minor problems (8/10)
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