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Seagull
Author: Bracemaiden
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(Added on May 25, 2005)
(This month 9783 readers) (Total 19443 readers) |
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A woman meets her on-line dom in a special way, and gets a surprise in return. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
biss987
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Sep 23, 2007 |
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Interesting twist at the end, though predictable. It could've used more sex and more humiliation. But generally speaking it was well written and worth reading. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Feb 8, 2006 |
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The major value of the story is that people have to be carfull in communicating adresses and other private info through internet.
Could however be a little more sexual. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
ever
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Aug 23, 2005 |
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the story was worth reading. the humiliation was okay but could have gone deeper. and I think it could have used more sex (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
rce
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Jun 3, 2005 |
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Well, she was stupid, but nevertheless, the bad guy won. That is not the kind of sex story I like. Rather well written, though. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Grey Slayer
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May 31, 2005 |
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Very enjoyable. I liked the build-up, though I knew she would come-a-cropper. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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May 27, 2005 |
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A good short-short. Nice character development, but the lady was DUMB. First meet with a Dom like that? She's nuts!
Although the conclusion was easily figured in advance, it wasn't badly done. A little more of the antagonist's thoughts and scheming would be nice, too. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Breannefun
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May 25, 2005 |
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This was an interesting plot, but I saw it coming a mile away, I had just hoped I was wrong! How could this girl be so stupid? Of course that really has nothing to do with the review does it? You did a great job of describing the self bondage. I would have liked to see a bit more development, especially in the main character. Also adding some visuals (other than how the character is tied up of course) would be a great idea. This was a quick read, enough to get me wet, but not enough to go anywhere. Keep up the good work.
(7/10)
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- Replied by:
bracemaiden
(Edit) (May 25, 2005)
- Thanks for the feedback. Hopefully chapter two will change the "not enough to go anywhere", and add a bit more room for development.
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