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Dogs R Us
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on May 31, 2005)
(This month 62579 readers) (Total 90014 readers) |
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A woman and her mother becomes sexual playthings for her next door neighbor and her teenage son. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Jan 12, 2006 |
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Writing is not too bad, storyline is outside the guidelines, but, hey! Why is this story still here? (5/10)
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rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Aug 11, 2005)
- Please, whatever you do, don't encourage him! On the other hand don't you have anything better to do with your time than review this dreck? You are dealing with someone who is a serial killer of words, plots and thoughts.
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| Reviewer:
pollyanna
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Jun 14, 2005 |
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Punctuation and spelling were abysmal. Poorly written so that story did not flow well. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
rabbit
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Jun 4, 2005 |
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liked it. Hope you continue it. Lots of scope.. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Jun 2, 2005 |
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The beginning of the story was a little underdeveloped. However the author overcame that and presented a nice piece of work. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Jun 2, 2005 |
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OK plot, but lack of writing skill destroys the flow. You need to realize that grammar and punctuation are important. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 1, 2005 |
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so far so good (9/10)
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