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Thunder and Lightning
Author: BaldJean
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(Added on Jun 11, 2005)
(This month 73746 readers) (Total 111237 readers) |
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A submissive lesbian couple is being made into ponygirls. |
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| Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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Dec 13, 2006 |
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A nice story, with very detail transformations, but it would benefit a lot with a bit more emotion -- telling the story with more reactions and thoughts from the recipients. As it is, it seems to be mostly descriptions of what is happening with not much of the characters to connect with. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
master2slavesny
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Jan 21, 2006 |
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Get some what realistic :( (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Bald_J_and_F
(Edit) (Jan 21, 2006)
- This is not intended to be "realistic", as you call it. This story is intended to go where one can't go in reality, which is in our opinion the purpose of a story. For anything else we don't have to write stories, we simply do it.
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| Reviewer:
Qmoq
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Jun 17, 2005 |
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Really good work, very impressive stuff indeed. Normally modification stories concentrate on the surgery and its results, but you've looked at how it affects the personality and outlook of the women, giving the story an interesting, emotional edge. I care about Thunder and Lightning. Will come back for future editions, hope to see Thunder and Lightning race each other one day! (By the way, I love a good enema/humiliation scene - kudos to you for doing one so well!) (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
allalone46
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Jun 16, 2005 |
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An looking forword for the fuure insallments. I find that the discriptions were well thought out but I would have wanted to now what was done and how to the poinies and a little about this Misstress that they were sent to for the modifacaation and her staff as well, that and there Misstress also.The permant chastity and other modifacations doen to the slavfe nad the others is well tought out but lacking in detale as to why expesulay for in the case of the staff. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
moonbeam1999
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Jun 15, 2005 |
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Thank you so much for the story. I love the theme, and well written. My only request would be a little more insight into the other characters. For instance, I would LOVE to read more about the 2 doctors in permanent chastity and the interplay between them and the Domme. Does she tease mercilesly them, punish them, etc? You mentioned they flinched when she stroked their head, why??
Thanks, and please continue the great story! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
BaldJean
(Edit) (Jun 16, 2005)
- Well noticed! The repulsion of the doctors was put in on purpose and is a hint at things to come. The story will expound on this.
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| Reviewer:
Dr.Hass
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Jun 15, 2005 |
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Great Story!
I like it very much and look forward to more chapters. Keep up the good Work d^^b (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ponytrainer12
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Jun 14, 2005 |
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Inflatable hoods, plugs and the removal of hair are essential elements of introduction of the girls to ponygirl regime. Nice images. Inly suggestion is o add more perspective from the victim. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Jun 12, 2005 |
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An interesting beginning. It could be worth a higher rating depending on where the author goes next. (7/10)
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oidMe
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Jun 12, 2005 |
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I like this. Although short chapters are always frustrating when a story first gets started (please don't let that feedback slow you down!). Well written! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 11, 2005 |
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please please more more real soon (10/10)
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- Replied by:
BaldJean
(Edit) (Jun 11, 2005)
- Thank you very much. Part 2 will be submitted today. I only wish there would be more reviews; I would really like to have some feedback.
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