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South of the Border
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Jun 11, 2005)
(This month 50763 readers) (Total 61978 readers) |
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Two young women gets more than they bargain for south of the border. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (3.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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Reviewer:
rce
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Jun 11, 2005 |
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I have seen many stories at BDSM Library with worse language, but this was still no good. (4/10)
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