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Revenge is Sweet
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Jun 25, 2005)
(This month 51130 readers) (Total 60020 readers) |
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Couple gets more than they bargain for when they decide to become real time slaves to a black mistress. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (3/10) |
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Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Rating: |
Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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