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Blondes Rule Brunettes Drool
Author: goodgone
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(Added on Jul 17, 2005)
(This month 102461 readers) (Total 201140 readers) |
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A brunette officegirl is dominated by a group of blonde interns who turn out to be part of a much larger organization |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 15, 2012 |
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I couldn't even get thru the first chapter of this story before I had to give up. Horrible grammar & a rushed pace doomed this story for me. (3/10)
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themaneloco
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Aug 3, 2006 |
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A very nice scenario which is captures my interest more with every chapter. (9/10)
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bigcat
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Feb 4, 2006 |
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The excessive aspects of basic and well known scenes in this D/s F+/f genre make it much better than most. Good hot extreme stuff. Keep it up. (8/10)
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readyben
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Dec 30, 2005 |
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Wow! Really hot, flows well, no end to the variety of ideas. Arousing. (8/10)
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ms2bused
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Oct 30, 2005 |
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Totally an entirely unmatchable story that includes everything that a true submissive can dream of!
Hoping this story wilol continue without end and that there may be equally enthusiastic ones to follow! (10/10)
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TAW
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Oct 27, 2005 |
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Great story.
Fast paced and energetic. Personally I was having so much fun reading it I did not notice any problems with the grammar or spelling. I hope some of the less than positive reviews you have gotten here do not discourage you from writing more.
Thank You for a fun evenings entertainment.
TAW (9/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Oct 11, 2005 |
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The sotry plot was excellent but some of the description lacked. (6/10)
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woolfighter
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Oct 9, 2005 |
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I like the premisses, lets see the story. The story is better then the premises (9/10)
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Master_c
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Sep 30, 2005 |
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I have read the first two parts of the story and so far it is great. I like the ideas presented and hope they will continue with more humiliation and exposure to the hot little brunette by those nasty blondes. Keep up the good work. (8/10)
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luka
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Sep 22, 2005 |
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Very good story! I hope there is more to come soon (10/10)
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rilawild
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Jul 20, 2005 |
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Great potential. The story has a familiar start, but it's one of the set ups that I enjoy so that's no problem. I look forward to future installments. The grammar needs a bit of work, which I think would make this a much higher rated story. (6/10)
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makito
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Jul 18, 2005 |
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An excellent start. I hope this becomes a series. (8/10)
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Jacen
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Jul 18, 2005 |
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The editing was a bit odd, especially sentance structure.. Short, obviously, but the paragraphs could use some seperation. A re-write of the first chapter would be good, and the second chapter has potential. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 17, 2005 |
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need to see where you go from here (6/10)
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Arcege
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Jul 17, 2005 |
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Nice story. Some typical plot devices, but I enjoyed the direction and description. I think the story could use more first person description, but that is just a matter of style. I hope it continues throughout the woman's year (and possibly beyond?). (7/10)
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lex ludite
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Jul 17, 2005 |
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The story has its moments, but the glaring lack of discipline when it comes to proof reading and obeying even the more rudimentary laws of grammar (i instead of I, im, etc, etc.....) leave a sour taste. By the way she was "prostrate" not prostate over the fence. This reader enjoys a good domination story involving females only, since they can really "bring it" as the saying goes. Thus I'll take a look at the next installment, which I presume is a possibility, and hope sincerely that the assault on the rules of grammar will have subsided somewhat. (5/10)
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ravenfish55
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Jul 17, 2005 |
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a good story line, with many different scenarios a possiblity. well written and good descriptions of the action. (9/10)
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