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The Prayer Author: I.W. Under
(Added on Jul 23, 2005) (This month 55363 readers) (Total 67579 readers)
A traveling merchant seeks aid in a small village and finds something else: a girl who is a living sacrifice.

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Weighed Average (?): (8.5/10)
Average Rating: (9/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (8/10)

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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Jun 17, 2010
This is one of those rare occasions where I couldn't get myself to even remotely like the story.
Well written, yes, imaginative too and even well tought out, but somehow, "The Prayer" gave me the creeps.
Maybe because it's a bit too close to a reality as lived by a lot of religeous nutcases, I don't know.
JJ (8/10)

Reviewer: Mad Lews (Edit) Rating: Jan 2, 2006
Not a bad story, quite inventive in places. You do need to keep in mind we poor readers haven't too much of a clue as to the background of your characters and their world. We could use a bit more info on both as you continue on with the story.
Ask and you shall receive, the story is quite wonderful, inventive, descriptive with a bit of a romantic twist.
I was remiss not returning to it sooner but I hope to make amends. Please allow me to revise my rating
(9/10)

Reviewer: kaleun76 (Edit) Rating: Aug 30, 2005
Holy sh@t this is hot.
More, more, you must post more right away!
Don't keep us waiting.
(10/10)

Reviewer: LordVetinari (Edit) Rating: Aug 2, 2005
Outstanding! Well written, erotic as hell. Truly an excellent story. (9/10)

Reviewer: cindi (Edit) Rating: Jul 28, 2005
beautifully thought out and written (10/10)

Reviewer: subbunny (Edit) Rating: Jul 27, 2005
A pretty good read, but just not my taste. I was facinated by the idea of the culture and would have like to have seen that explored more. Perhaps a flashback episode showing her training??? (8/10)

Reviewer: pejanon (Edit) Rating: Jul 26, 2005
Very interesting. Original concept. Good storytelling - the reader gets to feel the action. Good ambience too.
But - Prayer is one of a kind. A character one remembers even when the story itself has long faded away! I just loved her. Great build up - now fulfill the promise.
(8/10)

Reviewer: chooky_104 (Edit) Rating: Jul 23, 2005
I enjoyed the plot of the story even though I do not quite understand 'your' position in the story. Are you looking for a slave, or are you a Tourist? (8/10)

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