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Private Internment
Author: Saturday Writer
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(Added on Aug 9, 2005)
(This month 59078 readers) (Total 77416 readers) |
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A slightly more easy going approach to the popular "prisoner in the future" story. Relies on a lot of geeky remote control goodness. Find out what happens when a guy with enough money to buy two former co-workers discovers he can have it all. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
DeGrinch
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Jul 18, 2007 |
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I really liked the basic idea here, and the control device was greate. The writing is very readable and character development good. (8/10)
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Beelzebob
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Sep 18, 2005 |
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Incredible (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
jameslakes
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Aug 17, 2005 |
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I got frustrated reading this by the constant running of words together without proper spacing. This should have been run through a grammar check, or just one last proof reading prior to submitting it. Interesting initial plot but the difficulty of reading it got in the way... (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Saturday Writer
(Edit) (Aug 10, 2005)
- That's my fault for only sending a pdf file, which apparently was converted with some difficulty. I will send along a Word doc to the moderator. Hope that helps. In the mean time try the pdf file, it shouldn't have those errors.
SW
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| Reviewer:
CrazyMe
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Aug 14, 2005 |
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I liked it a lot. It was cute and sexy at the same time. Well-written, except for the little problem with the lack of space - but as you already explained, we could just use the pdf. The characters were belivable and interesting. All in all a very enjoyable read. (9/10)
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bdsmbill
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Aug 12, 2005 |
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Nice story. Well written. Too bad about the file conversion problem, but that is easily fixed. This was a good read. (9/10)
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Engineer
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Aug 12, 2005 |
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A really good and entertaining story. Although long, it becomes never boring. The author made a very good piece out of a well-proven theme, and found the right mixture of erotic, disciplinary and captivation content. Just some proofreading ist recommended. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 11, 2005 |
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found it just average (7/10)
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castle2001
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Aug 11, 2005 |
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Excellent story of a good length. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Guiller
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Aug 10, 2005 |
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Only one word:MORE (10/10)
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