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My Introduction
Author: Shaylea
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(Added on Aug 20, 2005)
(This month 49165 readers) (Total 59475 readers) |
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A teenage girl finds herself an unexpected witness to the punishment of her best friend's bad big brother by his father. She doesn't realise he knows it, and has a few plans of his own as far as she is concerned. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Clepsidra
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Aug 18, 2007 |
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I canŽt remember if IŽve already sen you a mail or something, so, just in case, IŽll write an review.
I love this story. I got most of it memorized. I think RyanŽs characterization is great - I just wish he had cried, but, oh well - and his submission is really hot. And the ending was a nice touch. Great work. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Aug 22, 2005 |
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I have to agree with Rocky and Carrieanne about being stilted. Most of the story was punishment noises and not real quality. (4/10)
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Rocky
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Aug 21, 2005 |
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Perhaps a bit stilted, but overall a good description of the goings-on. I'd like to see where this is going, and my reconsider my score after another chapter or two. (7/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Aug 20, 2005 |
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The story read rather stilted not the least bit exciting with just a bunch of punishment noises. I cannot imagine where you are going with this. (4/10)
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