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The Dictator's Claw
Author: General Dom
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(Added on Aug 31, 2005)
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Diana Palmer, crusading female journalist and human rights advocate, runs afoul of evil dictator General Tara, while attempting to expose his human rights violations to the world. |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 20, 2012 |
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Newspaper was very well done, although a tad long. Story is also very well done, but a touch too crude to my taste.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
carlo
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Mar 17, 2008 |
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WOMEN AND TORTURE: A MOTHER INTERROGATE IN FRONT HER SON.
The sexual humiliations, the torture or the incest, are rather embarrassing matters to treat; but what they often stimulate our sexual imaginations, when it are treated in realistic way.
The sexual imaginations, also the most perverse belong to the dark side of the human mind; the main point is not to exceed with the violence and the obscenity (no homicides, blood, etc.).
Unfortunately, often reality overcomes the most perverse imaginations, and to write a story in realistic way serves to exorcize the evil and to stimulate the imagination.
In Argentina, Uruguay, Chile, very people was tortured, after to be kidnapping in them house; many of these people were women. Recent cases concern the medioriente: Irak of Saddam Hussein, Saudi Arabia, Irak, often cases of European women, they was arrest for various motives, and often interrogate in front their sons.
Of all the dramatic situations in clandestine prisons, nothing can compare to those family groups who were tortured, often together. Brutalizing a mother in front of her son were favorite ways of trying to make the women talk. The entire affective family world, constructed over the years with very difficulty collapses. This is a special technique of torture within the title of psychological torture, it is named ‘family torture’.
In much in torture centers and in police stations, very women of 35 - 50 years old were questioned in presence of their young sons. This very perverse interrogation method was a method often used when the women were attractive and her son a young boy.
First because, the jailers are perverse and sadistic people,
Second because this interrogation method it is very effective, a terrible psychological torture: for every mother, the fact of being naked in front of a his son and suffer to sexual tortures is a terrible shock; besides every mother knows, how much this experience to be traumatizing for the weak sexual equilibrium of adolescent boy.
Silvia Martinez Basso a woman journalist and member of important association of human rights wrote this about the technical of mother-son interrogatory: <<In this perverse form of questioning the woman is submitted to tortures more psychological than physics....The woman is put in front to her own son, if not already naked yet, the woman is forced to strip to assume obscene and embarrassing positions; while talking to her, the interrogator puts her in distress: verbally abused she, fondling her breasts and her vagina. She is questioning in this manner about one hours, after to give her a deeper emotional shock, she is naked, bound in obscene position and she is submitted to a slow and minute cavità search (vaginal and anal), gyno exams, enemas and other forms of psychological tortures and humiliations>>. Continues Silvia Martinez Basso: <<The psychological tortures was not the only form of tortures to which to woman is submitted in presence of her adolescent son. In many cases to the psychological torture it followed that physics torture: breast tortures (breast press and breast hangings), electric shock low voltage for nipples and vagina, wooden pony, caning, bastinado (caning on feet shoes), insertions of toys in vagina and anus (dildo, pump dildo, vibrator), little branding with cigarettes (breast, vagina and soles). These physics tortures are painful but they don't provoke in the woman you damn permanent damn, because it are type to low intensity. In the cases of “family torture” the psychological torture is more effective of the physics torture>>.
B. Shaw a psychologist, e took care of a lot of victims of cases of family-torture, He says this: << The boy was forced to assist to the questioning of his own mother, while a warder slowly masturbated he. The boys try a strong sense of shame and anguish however happened, this is the more horrible and embarrassing aspect of this terrible experience.
Erection and ejaculation, it are common physiological reactions that escape the control of every adolescent boy especially in dramatic situations as that just described. This happens because in age of puberty the organism of every adolescent boy is submitted to strong sexual hormonal secretion, and therefore it is very sensitive to every form of sexual stimulus (he is masturbates from a perverse warder). Moreover, the torture team blackmails the boy, creating a obscene relationship among sexual stimulus and cessation of mother pain: << show to us your erection and we don’t torture of your mother>>.
B Shaw continues: <<In Argentina torture centre every forms of violence and perverse acts were practicable. The jalers often forced their victims to make incestuous acts. In torture centre, forced mother and son in incestuous acts was possible because the victims were exhausted, after weeks of torture physique and psychological, for then every resist was impossible. For understand this type of situation is necessary reflect about the victims, then physique and psychological condition. Mother and son are under blackmail, In these desperate situation, every mother accept every perverse acts, for save herself and her son from pain and dead>>.
What do you think about this? Do you have information about this (pics, story, article)?
Are you able to write something about this? This is the scenery and to write a good story: emotions, characters and scenery must be realistic.
Realistic actors
Mother and son, they have compatible age.
The mother, she is a beautiful woman 40 - 50 years old. The woman is dressed as the classic mother. She doesn't wears erotic underwear or latex, it isn't realistic. She wears normal clothes: skirt and blouse; simple underwear: bras, brief, pantyhose. She hasn't tattoo or piercing.
The son, he is a student of college or other
Realistic emotions.
The mother: Humiliations and tortures, she is interrogate in front her son. She feels very pain and shame.
The son: Fear and horror , he see his mother under torture and he can not react, because is tied up a chair and gagged. He is naked. Embarassament, for his physiological reactions……..
Realistic scenery
In a Country of South America, governed by a military junta a woman is arrested and questioned in presence of her son.
A mother and her son in vacation with her son in a Country of the Medioriente (Marocco, Emirates, etc.) they are arrested for…………
Honest mother and housewife, to cover the debts of family she is forced to be actress in hardcore movies, her son will discover all...
Best regards and thanks for your story.
Carlo
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| Reviewer:
isabeau6
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Jun 22, 2007 |
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ok please i just spent the better part of today reading this story in between chores...damn don't tell me there won't be an ending???? it's so good, with such a unique beginning..dayum...i can't believe i read it just to not have it end..damn (9/10)
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Ruby
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Sep 11, 2005 |
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Just finished chapter two. This is quite the nail biter. Please don't make us wait too long for following chapters. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
General_Dom
(Edit) (Sep 12, 2005)
- Hi Ruby, Thanks --- I really appreciate your review! I have had the next two chapters complete for awhile --- Jinn is backlogged on postings I think. Based on your response to what you've read so far, you'll find the next two installments equally intriguing... this story is more violent than previous efforts, hopefully I haven't gone too far. Please keep sending me your comments, they are valued. GD
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Llabmik
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Sep 7, 2005 |
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I like the beginning. The dummy newspaper stories are good and must have been fun to invent. Please continue. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
General_Dom
(Edit) (Sep 8, 2005)
- Hi Llabmik-
Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it.
Yes, the newspaper was a BLAST to make. I've actually made the layout a tad slicker, with quote boxes, sidebars, and such. All I need now are phony ads for torture equipment, LOL. You should see the new version very shortly, along with updated and new chapters 1-3.
Please feel free to offer suggestions on where you'd like the story to go.... I write in a very freestyle manner. While what turns "me" on is often very evident, I also want to find out the interests of my readers, as well. Chances are if you like this story, we're at least in the same ballpark, and that doesn't present any risk to my overall vision of the storyline, as far as I can see. I love fresh spins on time-tested themes, and I especially love creating BAAADDDD villains. :-)
General Dom
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bond
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Sep 6, 2005 |
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Good start - interesting to see real effort has gone into setting the scene.
I hope it isn't too long before we see what the general has in mind. Any chance you can add a bit more about his previous abuses? (7/10)
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- Replied by:
General_Dom
(Edit) (Sep 7, 2005)
- Thanks for the review, Bond.
In chapters 2 and 3, Diana will be forced to watch the torture of Wendy Franzen, mother of the girl Tara abducted, with a vaginal pear. As de-sensitizing Diana to his atrocities will serve him well in achieving his goals, Tara's going to make sure that she assists him, though unwillingly. Most of the tortures Gen. Tara favors are "double-edged" --- usually presenting two options that are equally uncomfotable to the victim, and then allowing them to decide their own fate. He's the kind of baddie who doesn't feel a torment is complete without adding a psychological element to the physical pain.
Thanks for your patience. My stuff is slow to start but, I promise you, there is a lot of agony in wait for Diana! But Tara likes to break people down slowly...
Please keep your comments coming, and if you have suggestions for things you'd like me to incorporate, I'd like to hear them, too.
General Dom
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| Reviewer:
rolf palsy
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Sep 3, 2005 |
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This has a lot of potential. I enjoyed the prologue for a number of reasons. The writing is better than most stuff posted here and the nostalgia it evokes in this reader is priceless. I look forward to more of this budding epic. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
General_Dom
(Edit) (Sep 3, 2005)
- Thanks Rolf, I appreciate the review! The "newspaper" was fun to mock up --- almost *too* much fun, as I can't seem to stop toying with it. Jinn should have an updated version posted very soon that has some quote boxes and a slightly slicker layout on some pages. I would enjoy hearing more about the "nostalgia" aspect you refer to, but think I have a good idea of what you mean. I enjoy writing old-school stories with complex, nasty villains and virtuous, though potentially corruptable heroines, etc. much more than just "cum-gargling slut X" and "psycho rapist Y." :-) My writing *is* different from a lot of the stuff on BDSM Lib --- I appreciate you noticing this. I get a fair share of grief because of it. My stuff tends to be more slow moving and psychological than most, and involves a lot of characters and sub-plots. It isn't a style of writing that invites readers to scan for hot buttons that get them off. But once it gets going, I think it holds its own as a real story, and that's what I'm going for. I need to work on my sex scene writing, and hope to introduce some more traditional erotic elements into TDC. If TDC holds your interest, I would deeply appreciate and welcome any suggestions you can make along the way. I tend to write as I go, so interactive suggestions are valued. If nothing else, I hope I will make the experience different for you than what you usually see. Thanks again, GD
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| Reviewer:
kemosabe
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Aug 31, 2005 |
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(This review is ignored in calculating the rating of this story!) Even ignoring the failed attempt at adding pictures to the prologue, the first chapter does absolutely nothing for me. If the General's plan is to kill the woman with Turkish cigarette smoke that will be an all time first for this web site. (2/10)
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- Replied by:
Jinn
(Edit) (Sep 1, 2005)
- The missing illustration is due to technical problem. Now the problem is fixed and I would appreciate it if you can revise your review. Thanks.
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| Reviewer:
castle2001
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Aug 31, 2005 |
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(This review is ignored in calculating the rating of this story!) The illustrations in this story do not show up with either NS or IE.
I will review again if things start working. (2/10)
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- Replied by:
Jinn
(Edit) (Sep 1, 2005)
- The missing illustration is due to technical problem. Now the problem is fixed and I would appreciate it if you can revise your review. Thanks.
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