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Forced Happieness Author: Dcent213
(Added on Sep 18, 2005) (This month 49887 readers) (Total 63094 readers)
Story of a workaholic girl who gets to live her dark fantasy. Depending on what feedback I get, this story can evolve quite a bit.

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Weighed Average (?): (7.5/10)
Average Rating: (8/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
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Reviewer: bracemaiden (Edit) Rating: Oct 4, 2005
To make it short, yeah, I agree with Mad Lews. Not only about the verb tenses, but the humiliation and blackmail too. (7/10)

Reviewer: Mad Lews (Edit) Rating: Sep 18, 2005
An interesting start to a story. On the technical points you might want to stay in past tense, it's really easier to write about what has happened. You start in the present tense, which is a really difficult way to tell anything but a very short story. Just a suggestion. As far as the NC sex, humiliation, and blackmail, you've got that down just fine, keep up the good work. (7/10)

Reviewer: TzA (Edit) Rating: Sep 18, 2005
I think the story is written quite good, and it has an interesting beginning. Looks promising to me, I hope you will continue writing. (8/10)

Reviewer: Dcent (Edit) Rating: Sep 18, 2005
I'm just trying to draw some extra attention. Please let me know what you think. (10/10)

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