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The Cocoon
Author: Koppite727
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(Added on Oct 28, 2005)
(This month 65082 readers) (Total 98963 readers) |
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A man's desires for permanent submission lead him down a road where even his mind can not escape. Unfortunately for him, he finds a woman more than willing to go to great lengths to make it all happen, whether he likes it or not! |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
slave4life901
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Dec 10, 2010 |
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I loved this story. It was very well done. The humiliation of the guy was great. (9/10)
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bullfinch
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well written and well paced. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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Oct 31, 2005 |
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Very enjoyable, though I would have like just a touch more "realism" early on (esp. re: the cocoon machine) and to learn more about his phsysical re-making. But a lovely tale of absolute control. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Oct 29, 2005 |
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Very intense story excellent plot. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
DungeonMaster6
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Oct 28, 2005 |
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This was a intense as any story I've read. An original idea for sure. I hope there's more. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
SlavePhil
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Oct 28, 2005 |
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i liked it, but it seemed a little short. i love the branding scene but the rest was a little strange since i was not all that into mummification. i wish there was more torture involved. the strapon scene was pretty hot, too, but i wish it were a little more graphic, too.
Overall, though, i really liked it. Keep up the great work. (7/10)
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