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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Koolaid
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Mar 9, 2006 |
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I haven't read your other stuff, but will now. This is a fantastic story! Your pacing was excellent, the switches between gentleness and extreme cruelty were wonderful. Your dialogue is also very good, you could actually flesh it out some more during the scenes. Also, I actually liked the first master best and would have liked to save him to last. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
chooky_104
(Edit) (Mar 10, 2006)
- Thanks. Glad you liked it.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 14, 2006 |
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great read (8/10)
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chooky_104
(Edit) (Feb 15, 2006)
- Cheers for that.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Nov 26, 2005 |
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Maybe I missed something, or just got caught on a bad day. This story was OK, but not really great. It seemed to me that much of the dialogue was oversimplified, almost with a junior high level of talk. The premise was OK, just didn't seem to gel quite right. I'll check for updates, and see if I can raise the score with additional chapters. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
chooky_104
(Edit) (Feb 14, 2006)
- Yep, you missed something.
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Nov 25, 2005 |
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I was not so thrilled with this story as other readers. Not that it was a bad story, it wasn't. My main difficulty was with the notion that a slave would "allow" her master to do anything to her. It would seem that it wasn't her choice and that she would be forced. Another problem I had was that the main character was clearly a slave and her master kept referring to her as "sub". Perhaps I am being picky, but it was inconsistencies like that which took away from my enjoyment of the tale. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
chooky_104
(Edit) (Nov 28, 2005)
- Thanks for your comments. Perhaps our relationship is unique to us and the need to conform with perceived 'rights and wrongs' has passed us by. I know where I am in the relationship and he knows what he wants from me. The fact that we may sometimes use the incorrect terminology, and my stories don't carry the W/we, H/he standard doesn't mean that our relationship is any less BDSM.
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H Dean
(Edit) (Nov 28, 2005)
- Chooky, you commented - "and my stories don't carry the W/we, H/he standard doesn't mean that our relationship is any less BDSM." - I commented on the story consistencies and not your personal life. Also, I did not comment on "W/we" or any other incipid chat room stylizing, why would you bring it up?
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| Reviewer:
sheilagirl
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Nov 24, 2005 |
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Delightful, realistic, extreeeemely erotic!! Impossible to read without getting aroused. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
chooky_104
(Edit) (Nov 28, 2005)
- Cool. Thats what I like to hear.
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| Reviewer:
love8651
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Nov 24, 2005 |
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Would have earned a 10. Meed to improve on grammer. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
chooky_104
(Edit) (Nov 28, 2005)
- Sorry about the grammar. I tend to write as I speak. Perhaps my Australian grammar is not up to yours.
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| Reviewer:
gundam
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Nov 23, 2005 |
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And this was day 1, can't wait to read about day 2 & 3. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
chooky_104
(Edit) (Nov 28, 2005)
- Thanks. Im working on them right now. Be patient.
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| Reviewer:
ljd
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Nov 23, 2005 |
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I love chooky104 stories all exellent reads. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
chooky_104
(Edit) (Nov 28, 2005)
- Glad you like them. Have you read many of my other stories?
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| Reviewer:
servoo99
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Nov 23, 2005 |
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SUPERB.HOPE FOR MORE (10/10)
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- Replied by:
chooky_104
(Edit) (Nov 28, 2005)
- Thanks for that.
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