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Abduction
Author: Nikaia
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(Added on Dec 4, 2005)
(This month 64384 readers) (Total 113433 readers) |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Mar 25, 2010 |
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Great start to a promising series about these two people. But come on where is the rest? (9/10)
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mirage
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Oct 4, 2007 |
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fast start and the quick pace of this story continued throughout to the end.
I also like the unusual idea of the slave's eyes being patched. bound and gagged + blinded make the captive more helpless than ever. (7/10)
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strict_master
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Dec 30, 2005 |
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Great story...beautiful premise and tastefully written. I like the unusual touch of the slave's eyes being patched. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nikaia
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Dec 16, 2005 |
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Thank you all for your kind words and encouragement to continue. I will in fact be continuing this tale, and anticipate having submitted a second installment by the end of December - no promises about the site's update time, though! So keep your eyes out for a Part 2 by early January at the latest!
Thanks all!
- Nikaia (8/10)
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RaeSeven
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Dec 11, 2005 |
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interesting. would need to read more for a better rating. (6/10)
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La Toya
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Dec 11, 2005 |
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great start (8/10)
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redEva
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Dec 8, 2005 |
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Excelent beginning .. please continue! (8/10)
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Mad Lews
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Dec 7, 2005 |
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Excellent writing and story telling skills. A very fine beginning. I'm sure you deserve a higher score but I'll await the development of the characters and plot before I adjust it upward as it no doubt deserves. (8/10)
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H Dean
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Dec 7, 2005 |
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An excellent offering and I look forward to more. Too, I look forward to improving my review rating should you continue this tale. As it is, it leaves one waiting in anticipation of further installments. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Dec 7, 2005 |
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great start please keep adding to it (9/10)
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unalkoto
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Dec 7, 2005 |
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This story really had me going, and I was desperate to read on. It did not say 'will be continued' and just ended, so I was afraid that perhaps it would not continue. I actually sent a mail to the author before realizing I could comment here.
What I like about this story is the way complete surrender is enforced, the total helplessness of the victim, how straight the dominating woman is with how she wants to use the other person for her own pleasure, whatever it might be, and, of course, the undertones of cool grace and sexual tension. True dominance. (10/10)
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chksng19
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Dec 7, 2005 |
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Fine writing, and a beginning boding great things. Anxious for the next chapter! (9/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Dec 6, 2005 |
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Definitely an excellent start to a great work of internet erotica. (8/10)
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petleah
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Dec 6, 2005 |
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Definitely a high quality piece of erotic art! I'm certainly looking forward to more chapters and discovering how Lina's new pet adapts to her new life.
Congratulations on a job well done. Keep up the great work! :) (9/10)
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USMC4ME
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Dec 5, 2005 |
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Outstanding work. But tell us more about their bodies - I know you have a picture, share it.
I hope you continue the story - don't worry about reviews that urge you "get to the good stuff" Its so much better to focus on the fear and lust of the moments leading up to the action. If a reader understands the captor/victim the action will be more impactful.
Great work - hope it was helpful. (9/10)
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