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Edna’s Basement
Author: Missy
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(Added on Jan 14, 2006)
(This month 67772 readers) (Total 99328 readers) |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 19, 2010 |
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Never been too keen on bible-munching folk, but they make excellent fodder for tapdancing on their rather unstable psyche.
Story is well written and Missy is of the very pliable sort, which makes for a tale with bends and contortions which speak to a certain darker part of the imagination.
Nice.
JJ (9/10)
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redwrangler
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Oct 25, 2008 |
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I enjoyed this story and her reluctant some what painful discovery of her anus and vagina. The story mentioned paddles and I so hoped she would be paddled on her butt, maybe during sex, oo those thud vibrations of the wooden paddle would have really awaken her sexual heat! Perhaps in your next adventure? (9/10)
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rilawild
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Nov 12, 2006 |
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An excellent story. Fun to read and well written. I'd love to read more.
The only change I would have made would have been to extend the period at the beggining where Edna is starting to initiate Missy before Missy realises that something is wrong. But that is not a major criticism. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 12, 2006 |
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they do not get any better then this (10/10)
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jip
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Apr 24, 2006 |
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Excellent! (10/10)
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faust82
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Apr 15, 2006 |
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This story both intrigued and excited me to no end, since it involves initiation into sex in a way that breaks both bodily and mental barriers. It's a tale of wrong religiousity turned into very, VERY right religiousity. Though not a christian myself, I don't see the point in their god giving us the tools of pleasure if we weren't supposed to use them.
I'm also a fan of lesbian, if not rape, then at least forcibly induced relations. This is one of the better.
I would also like to join in with Ashtree's review. More of this story! MORE! I have to know what happens next! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
missybeauty1985
(Edit) (Apr 15, 2006)
- thanks for the review. the person that i worked on this story with doesn't have the time to do anymore stories. i am working on a story w/ Ashtree and once we get done w/ it, we might go ahead and continue this one.
Thanks
Missy
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Ashtree
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Jan 27, 2006 |
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Very well written and a good theme, love to see it as a long series (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Powerone
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Jan 25, 2006 |
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Excellent Story, especially for the first one. Good plot and action. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Jan 20, 2006 |
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Very well done. (8/10)
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Kev
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Jan 17, 2006 |
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I always liked the scenario where the girl/woman realize that she indeed crave the orgasms and pleasures.
Well written with good contradictory thoughts from poor Missy. (8/10)
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