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The Sex Slave
Author: Romy
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(Added on Jan 22, 2006)
(This month 80319 readers) (Total 128463 readers) |
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Sarah wakes up to realise she is a prisoner in a high rise appartment block. With no hope of escape she must act out all the sick fantasies of her kidnapper and sadist Master. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
fitzgilbert
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Apr 27, 2012 |
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Une suite serait bienvenue. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
nookie
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Mar 7, 2006 |
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I really enjoyed the lack of sentimentality in use of the slave. The total sense of vulnerability is quite the turn-on. Please keep up the good work. (10/10)
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slivy
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Feb 1, 2006 |
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it's a good mix about helplessness, bondage, pain, slavery etc... (oh, and the dog). Keep going! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jan 25, 2006 |
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Well, you have too many typos to even count! You give no background or reason why the guy kidnapped her. The story has no guts to it--just a lot of humiliation and torture. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
woolfighter
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Jan 25, 2006 |
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wonderful. Make all her friends come and don't stop there...
Thanks for writing. (9/10)
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tragedy3
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Jan 25, 2006 |
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enjoyed it. like the concept,but needs more details. maybe not so much time with the dog. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Romy
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Jan 25, 2006 |
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Sorry guys. I uploaded the unchecked version by mistake. I can't bear spelling miskates. Damn. The next chapter will be well checked. Consider me well chastised. Thanks for all the comments. I'll bear them all in mind. (Ooops got to rate it, might aswell give it a 10 LOL) (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Tibideux
(Edit) (Jan 25, 2006)
- (Ooops got to rate it, might aswell give it a 10 LOL) (10/10)
You should have responded to the comments directly instead of reviewing your story yourself. Your "LOL" is out of place. Consider yourself chastised again for this tacky little event.
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Jan 25, 2006 |
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Heavy piece, dude! Keep it going. Smell romance in the air. Very good start to a heavy fantasy tale. (8/10)
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love8651
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Jan 24, 2006 |
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When you can feel the pain, disgust and humiliation, of the character, then you have told your story well. Please don't tone down the theme of your story. If you do, it become like some of the others, boring. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 24, 2006 |
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despite other reviewers i enjoyed te stpry, i often mispell also, so i can live with that in a story, but i do suggest you spell check before your next posting to make it easier and more enjoyble for all to read your work (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Jan 24, 2006 |
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Much could be done to improve the plausibility of this story. There was no fight in the girl, as all. This is not something to be expected after an abduction, there is at least a little fight. There were more things than that to make this a rather untenable story though they could have been overcome with a bit more life. Finally, the grammatical errors were costly to the flow of the story, as was the spelling. Potential for something much more, maybe. A little more time in the crafting would be helpful, though. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Jan 23, 2006 |
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There were so miss spellings. I kind of wish you went into more details when the "buddies" came over. I Would have like to read what was going through her mind the first in with the dog.
Other that what I stated above, It was a good story. I will wait to see were you take it from here, and may raise my rating (6/10)
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