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Julie\'s Pain Author: Master Matthew
(Added on Mar 15, 2006) (This month 66372 readers) (Total 82554 readers)
Julie is bound and tormented as he whispers on her ear what they will do to her

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Average Rating: (8.5/10)
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Reviewer: La Toya (Edit) Rating: Mar 26, 2006
While some minor problems have been pointed out, and easy to correct. This is a story that I would love to see more chapters of. (9/10)
Replied by: MasterMatthew (Edit) (Mar 26, 2006)
Hi La Toya, Thank you for the review. Whislt I am not sure if there will be more of this specific story, the main character should return.

Reviewer: Koolaid (Edit) Rating: Mar 18, 2006
I was also disturbed by exaggerations. Otherwise, relentless and deliciously sadistic poetry. (9/10)
Replied by: MasterMatthew (Edit) (Mar 19, 2006)
Hi Koolaid, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: jip (Edit) Rating: Mar 16, 2006
Be careful not to exagerate. The 200 kg bag is an example. An average sand or cement bag is already very heavy and only 50 kgs. Outside this detail, I have my toughts as it is not very believable. (5/10)
Replied by: MasterMatthew (Edit) (Mar 16, 2006)
Hi jip, Thanks for the review. I must admit I was not really trying for absolute realism (mind you I have seen someone in exactly that position with a 200kg weight supended from their breasts - not for very long though I must admit). Once again, thanks for the review. M

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Mar 15, 2006
Finely crafted story. Beautiful, detailed word pictures make the story hot and sexy! Can't wait for the next section. (9/10)
Replied by: MasterMatthew (Edit) (Mar 16, 2006)
Hi chksng19, thanks for the review. I don't really have any plans to do more on that specific topic; but Julie is a favourite character of mine so you might see more of her in other stories.

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Mar 15, 2006
increably hot, well detailed hope you ad more real soon (10/10)
Replied by: MasterMatthew (Edit) (Mar 16, 2006)
Hi mkemse, thanks for the great review! I should be posting more soon, but probably not on that speific story. Thanks again, M

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