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Alona a strict wife
Author: stHell66
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(Added on Mar 17, 2006)
(This month 59345 readers) (Total 78373 readers) |
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Wimpy white boy getting enslaved by Alona his engaged wife, and a few black men |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
badcatholicgirl
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Aug 11, 2006 |
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enjoyed the story but need to work on writing, still enjoyed it (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Mar 18, 2006 |
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I have to agree the story could have been better developed. The plot is a good plot but just needs to have more detail. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 18, 2006 |
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Stoy is basically not bad but I felt it somewhat confused. (5/10)
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