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Janet\'s New Home
Author: Tojo
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(Added on Mar 18, 2006)
(This month 51128 readers) (Total 63072 readers) |
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Written for a dear friend as a combination of both our fantasies |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 25, 2010 |
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A bit of a pedestrian storyline, saved by the author's skill. Nothing to go all oingo-boingo about, but a nice read.
JJ (8/10)
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cariad(CC)
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Jul 3, 2006 |
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What a beautiful story. Well done Tojo. You achieved the perfect balance between giving enough detail to describe the scene, whilst leaving enough gaps for the reader to savour the erotic experience through their own imagination. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Mar 20, 2006 |
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I am sort of up and down on this story. I must admit, when I read that they had met via internet, I had pictured the girl to be a fat old guy with a major alcohol problem - a bit distracting. Now that I am past that, I will say that the story is told rather well, flowing with no difficulty. The relatively tame acceptance of the captive, regarding her situation, bothered me somewhat. There were a few minor technical issues, though they were not distracting. All in all, a good read and I am looking forward to the next installment. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Mar 20, 2006 |
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Excellent work from a very promising and talented author. Tasteful, but nevertheless with the air of erotic power. Thoroughly edited, with some surprising twists in the storyline - sometimes a bit crossing the border of credibility. (9/10)
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laursie
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Mar 20, 2006 |
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Very well written. Loved this story. A twisted sweetness. Very erotic without having to use all the normal four letter words. Can't wait to read more from you. (9/10)
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petleah
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Mar 19, 2006 |
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Fantastic! Well written, no grammar/spelling errors, professional layout. I appreciate your talent for the lack of vulgarity while still quite clearly communicating your ideas!
Bravo! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Tojo
(Edit) (Mar 19, 2006)
- Thanks very much for that, gives me incentive to put another one up :)
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heycarrieanne
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Mar 18, 2006 |
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A good story. I look forward to reading more. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Tojo
(Edit) (Mar 19, 2006)
- Thanks for taking to trouble to reply- comments such as this mean a lot.
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