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House Invasion
Author: Aaron
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(Added on Mar 20, 2006)
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A young man comes home after a long day, only to be attacked, used and abused. |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
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Mar 27, 2006 |
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The grammer is terrible I have to agree. The author seems to have a vivid imagination which is nice. Still, I suspect English isn't the author's first language. (3/10)
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bdsmbill
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Mar 21, 2006 |
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The constant grammar and spelling errors make this story hard to read. The tool of a writer is language. Learn to use it. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
SlavePhil
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Mar 21, 2006 |
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i loved it. especially the idea of the idiot getting dildofucked til he bled and then left there. very nice and brutal domination. (7/10)
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