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Down, Out, and Fucked Author: acidflux
(Added on Apr 7, 2006) (This month 48208 readers) (Total 59538 readers)
a weird meeting, a crazy commin together

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Weighed Average (?): (3/10)
Average Rating: (2.5/10)
Highest Rating: (5/10)
Lowest Rating: (1/10)

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Reviewer: bracemaiden (Edit) Rating: Apr 22, 2006
I have to agree with heycarrieanne. Native English speakers will have access to spell-checkers, which will also tell of common grammatical mistakes. Talk to others, and your stories will improve. (2/10)

Reviewer: Dododecapod (Edit) Rating: Apr 21, 2006
Learning spelling and basic grammar would at least make this readable. I have no idea about any of the rest - story, pacing, erotic content? If one cannot communicate effectively, all content is irrelevant. Try again. (1/10)

Reviewer: laursie (Edit) Rating: Apr 10, 2006
where is the beginning and end? (3/10)

Reviewer: La Toya (Edit) Rating: Apr 9, 2006
I agree with the other reviews (2/10)

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Apr 9, 2006
Not really a reviewable story. Mostly without plot, not really much of anything. (2/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Apr 8, 2006
not sure what to make of the story, it seems to go nowhere (2/10)

Reviewer: jip (Edit) Rating: Apr 8, 2006
Story is somewhat slow and stops when action starts.
Perhaps it is only part 1 of more to come.
Could review my score later onwards if another part is added. (5/10)

Reviewer: heycarrieanne (Edit) Rating: Apr 7, 2006
I am guessing that English isn't your first language. You have typos galore and your grammar is just bad. I could not even follow your story. Perhaps you might want to find an editor to help you over in the forums. (2/10)

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