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A Night to Remember
Author: Sandra Ciancio
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(Added on Apr 11, 2006)
(This month 65488 readers) (Total 107344 readers) |
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Master shows His slave He truly owns her, body and soul |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Amars
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Jun 9, 2010 |
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Very good story, enjoyed reading it, will look for more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 17, 2009 |
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Another very well executed story. Sexy, with just the right tone and feel.
A splendid picture of how the sub prepares according to her master's wishes and how she goes on to humble herself in abject servitude. Delicious.
On the 'technical' side, maybe make paragraphs a tad shorter.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
butterflySlave4u
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Mar 18, 2007 |
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Would love to read more...her total degradation and descent into her new life was a pleasure to see...would liked to have heard more detail, about the branding..overall, and excellent piece... (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
madphysics
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Apr 22, 2006 |
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Delightfuly dark and very enjoyable to read. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Slut4U
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Apr 22, 2006 |
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I really enjoyed this story. Keep up the good work (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Apr 21, 2006 |
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An excellent erotic piece. Your refusal to use names and free verse style worked to great effect here, most impressive given the difficulty imposed by each. I especially liked the way your narrative grew sparser and more ungrammatical as the action built in intensity; to use the rules of writing is wonderful, and all too rare, but you have clearly progressed to the level of knowing when (and how) to break them.
One small criticism, however - you seem to have a slight problem with apostrophes, or lack therof.
A most impressive and erotic piece. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
pollycoventry
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Apr 21, 2006 |
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great images but more detail of her feelings would have added (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
master B
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Apr 12, 2006 |
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this story hit home with me, a Master taking his sub to a new area of complete and utter submission. I especially like the branding, as he makes her completely his. Much like the "Story of O". I wonder if Sandra has lived this? (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Apr 12, 2006 |
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Not bad, the burining iron somewhat exagerating, but ok. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
master B
(Edit) (Apr 12, 2006)
- side note to jip.....branding, tattooing or other markings given to a submissive is widely used in many areas of this lifestyle and is a very important part of that submissives complete surrender
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