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Kristin\'s Drive Home
Author: seamusduggery
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(Added on May 4, 2006)
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Kristin Blake is 19 years old and on her way from a long day at her college. She fails to obey a traffic device and is taught a thing or two by a local police officer |
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jun 21, 2006 |
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In fact it is a story of a pure rape by cops!
But even when there are some doubts about the realistic part, it is still enjoyable to read (6/10)
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jennjenn
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May 7, 2006 |
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its a good story and i have often done the bad cop thing in fantasy lol ... exploring her feelings would have made the story better but for a 1st story ...nice work (5/10)
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- Replied by:
seamusduggery
(Edit) (May 7, 2006)
- Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It was a test run and I think you'll probably be seeing more to come.
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BigCat76
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May 6, 2006 |
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Sorry, wrote longish review, then told not logged in, even though I am. Basically, something off, not sure what, sorry. Going from "take off your clothes" to grapping hair and action without forcing the clothing to be removed until later is off. Confused by the others comments about plausability and half-naked girl driving home. Hopefully the system will remember I'm logged in this time. Oh, just remembered first part of original review: I have no problem if a story is shortish, not all stories need to be book-length. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
seamusduggery
(Edit) (May 7, 2006)
- Thanks for the positive review. Forum timesout fairly quickly it would seem. I've lost reviews/replies myself in the past to that. Once again, thanks for taking the time to read and review.
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chattel69
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May 6, 2006 |
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How do you explain a half naked 19 year old getting home? Yeah this is fantasy but isn't fantasy based on reality to an extent? (4/10)
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- Replied by:
seamusduggery
(Edit) (May 6, 2006)
- I made no attempt to write about the drive home. Perhaps I should have. Yes, fantasy is based on reality. I think these questions may have better been received through the e-mail in my profile rather than here in the review section. What is the likelyhood that you actually check back to read this anyhow?
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mkemse
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May 5, 2006 |
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the biggest issue i have with the story is that it started out great, but between the cop stopping her and him getting himself off using her mouth, the story zipped by, it was as if you tried to get the story started and finished very quickly, i loiked the concept of the stor,y the idea is great but you went at a real goos spped then zipped through the rest of it (4/10)
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- Replied by:
seamusduggery
(Edit) (May 6, 2006)
- Thank you for your comment. The story is short and I will certainly make a better effort in the future. This was my first attempt.
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chksng19
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May 5, 2006 |
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Riiiiight. And the Easter Bunny and Santa Claus met him at the diner for his mid-shift donut.
Yes, this is fantasy fuction. It is literate. But nobody living in the States or Europe would have any possibility of believing such a thing could happen. The stuff needs to be at least plausable! (4/10)
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- Replied by:
seamusduggery
(Edit) (May 6, 2006)
- Thanks for the review. This is a fantasy/fiction and therefore isn't bound by the rules of reality. I should include that police officers in both America and Europe have been convicted of murders as well as other heinous crimes. This is plausable. I'd appreciate any additional constructive criticism.
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