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Captive Twins
Author: Incomplete
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(Added on Jun 6, 2006)
(This month 64600 readers) (Total 90877 readers) |
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Asian twins get abducted by a demented sadist. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
thehammerspakeagain
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Aug 22, 2006 |
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not one second does the story comes to anywhere near being logical and realistic. Nor is it very imaginative. What a reader hears is none but too autobiographical hints of the author himself and his stomping on the ground writing in vengeance. A pure work of garbage. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Parker
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Jun 7, 2006 |
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I've enjoyed all three of the "Incomplete" stories posted, but, of the three, this seems to be the most cohesive. One thing I liked about this one, and in the earlier stories, is the forced use of humiliating language. Nicely done. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 6, 2006 |
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not bad at all, i real keeper (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Incomplete
(Edit) (Jun 6, 2006)
- Thanks for the comments. I appreciate it when I get feedback as that helps me improve as a writer. Additionally, who doesn't want the encouragement? Thank you all for reading!
- Replied by:
Incomplete
(Edit) (Jun 6, 2006)
- Thanks for the comments. I appreciate it when I get feedback as that helps me improve as a writer. Additionally, who doesn't want the encouragement? Thank you all for reading!
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