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Captive Twins Author: Incomplete
(Added on Jun 6, 2006) (This month 64600 readers) (Total 90877 readers)
Asian twins get abducted by a demented sadist.

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Weighed Average (?): (6.5/10)
Average Rating: (7/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (4/10)

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Reviewer: thehammerspakeagain (Edit) Rating: Aug 22, 2006
not one second does the story comes to anywhere near being logical and realistic. Nor is it very imaginative. What a reader hears is none but too autobiographical hints of the author himself and his stomping on the ground writing in vengeance. A pure work of garbage. (4/10)

Reviewer: Parker (Edit) Rating: Jun 7, 2006
I've enjoyed all three of the "Incomplete" stories posted, but, of the three, this seems to be the most cohesive. One thing I liked about this one, and in the earlier stories, is the forced use of humiliating language. Nicely done. (8/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jun 6, 2006
not bad at all, i real keeper (9/10)
Replied by: Incomplete (Edit) (Jun 6, 2006)
Thanks for the comments. I appreciate it when I get feedback as that helps me improve as a writer. Additionally, who doesn't want the encouragement? Thank you all for reading!
Replied by: Incomplete (Edit) (Jun 6, 2006)
Thanks for the comments. I appreciate it when I get feedback as that helps me improve as a writer. Additionally, who doesn't want the encouragement? Thank you all for reading!

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