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At The Bottom Of The Bag
Author: Lisa Jones
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(Added on Jun 17, 2006)
(This month 68221 readers) (Total 101415 readers) |
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A wife finds a BDSM magazine at the bottom of her husbands overnight bag after a business trip. What should she do about it? |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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nrjb2
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Dec 10, 2011 |
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Great story. Very believable and gets into the thoughts of the characters. (10/10)
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xSoCalCynicx
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Nice buildup of characters; well-balanced story that is a pleasure to read. (9/10)
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Dryhill
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i agree with onewhoadores that this story could be continued but perhaps the author knows best. But purely from a selfish point of view i would love to read more about these 4 people. Perhaps we could learn about how husband and wife first met, it is hinted at in the last chapter. (10/10)
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Exocet
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Mar 26, 2010 |
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Great. One of Lisa Jones' best ones. Has a lot of potential to develop into a much longer series.
The credible storyline builds nicely, gradually getting more and more into the whole BDSM scene. Maybe a further update will reveal what the 'Christmas Trees' were for? ;-} (10/10)
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Gnarlyjibs
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Dec 18, 2008 |
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Wow Great story just wish it was finished. it has so much potential, and there is so much that could happen with this. i very much enjoyed reading this, one of the best i've read!!! thank you for writing (10/10)
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onewhoadores
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Oct 24, 2008 |
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I just recently discovered this gem. It is an absolute classic of loving D/s femdom literature. It is the ultimate secret submissive husband fantasy come true, but being told from the viewpoint of an insecure wife and woman finding her inner Domme, made it far more effective and realistic. It literally begs for a continuation, but maybe the author knows best and will let the readers' imaginations take over from here. Even at this late date, the author is to be congratulated and thanked for this great story. (10/10)
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phrazer
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Dec 8, 2007 |
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I am really looking forward to the next chapter. (10/10)
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Lady`Sapphire
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Jul 27, 2006 |
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The characters are extremely realistic and the story just feels positively authentic. The plot is well-paced and the descriptions are admirable. Hope to read more of it soon. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lisa Jones
(Edit) (Jul 29, 2006)
- Thanks for your kind words. There is one more part to come, but it may be a while yet.
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Taoxx
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Jul 25, 2006 |
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The story is absoluteley realistic. You have found the perfect balance between realistic character development and hot action. Thank You so much, Maam. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Lisa Jones
(Edit) (Jul 29, 2006)
- Thanks for the 10/10. I'm glad you enjoyed the realism. Some of it is drawn from life!
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uktrucker100
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Jul 22, 2006 |
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I have to say I think this is one of the best written stories I have had the joy of reading! (10/10)
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bound_bob
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Jun 28, 2006 |
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Loved it! Very good 'first time Femdom' type story. Can't wait to read more from this writer. (9/10)
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Wistan
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Jun 23, 2006 |
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Good stuff. The author creates a believable atmosphere and realistic characters, and gets a good balance of describing the action, the dialogue, what people are thinking and feeling, how they are reacting. It left me interested to see just how far they are going to take this... (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lisa Jones
(Edit) (Jun 23, 2006)
- Thank you. There's at least one more part to come, but it's not finished yet, watch this space!
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trainmanretep
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Jun 22, 2006 |
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very nice, I like the way you developed the characters. Looking forward to the next installment (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lisa Jones
(Edit) (Jun 22, 2006)
- The next installment is already posted, it will be available as soon as the site admins have the time.
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jip
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Jun 20, 2006 |
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Enjoyed this. Agree with the others that the story is realistic. (9/10)
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Millie
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Jun 20, 2006 |
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The way into this story was very realistic, the discovery, the indecision, very nicely done. Your characterization is always so real. I hope there is more to come. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lisa Jones
(Edit) (Jun 20, 2006)
- Don't worry, Millie, Part 2 is nearly ready for posting and Part 3 is being written.
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subjames222
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Jun 20, 2006 |
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Really enjoyed this one... Very realistic! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lisa Jones
(Edit) (Jun 20, 2006)
- Thank you, I hope you enjoy the remainder - when it's posted
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