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Hilda\' s two Masters
Author: Cecilita
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(Added on Jul 22, 2006)
(This month 112554 readers) (Total 133758 readers) |
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Hilda is a submissive girl in her very early twenties. When her boyfriend and Master break up with her she meet by chance a new Master. She later in her story ends up in a situation where her Master shares her as a slave-girl with a friend of him. She had to serve two Masters, but only enjoy the one of them herself, at the other’s feet it is duty and obedient service. |
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Aug 27, 2006 |
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I personally found the "second language" aspect charming. Gives it a certain innocence, almost a purity in its portrayal of her submission. I thought the inner life, absent in so many tales, was very rich here. Keep it up. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Aug 20, 2006 |
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I sincerely hope that English is not your first language ... nor that of your so-called proof reader. Your language is very stilted. The idea behind your story might be good, but it does not come out in your writing. (2/10)
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