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JanTakes Charge
Author: Masterinc
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(Added on Aug 1, 2006)
(This month 88998 readers) (Total 119466 readers) |
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This is the story of a young dominatrix who learns her influencial parents are both submissives who like to play bdsm games behind closed doors. It contains a form of incest but there is no direct genital intercourse between the daughter and her parents. It is all oral. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
themaneloco
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Aug 18, 2006 |
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This is coming along well and improving with each chapter. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Aug 7, 2006 |
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Good start. Not like the synopsis, but it does say it's an intro so I look forward to seeing how it develops. As a character intro, though, I'd like to learn more about her -- you spend more time talking about her club -- and see a bit more plot or conflict. An emphasis on description would also help; more adjectives and adverbs, less narration! Altogether intriguing and worth the read, and I hope more chapters come soon. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 3, 2006 |
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intresting concept i rarely see, well done (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
GarrickBailley
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Aug 3, 2006 |
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well so far this story is nothing like the synopsis...but it was still quite good. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Aug 2, 2006 |
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I enjoyed the story very much. The plot was developed and the story flowed well. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Millie
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Aug 2, 2006 |
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I enjoyed the story very much but it had nothing to do with your summary. I imagine it is an introduction of sorts, but if so you should have mentioned it. That said, it was still good and I will look for follow ups. (7/10)
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