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Summer Barbeque
Author: Silk
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(Added on Aug 7, 2006)
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A new slave is pushed to her limit by her Master in a coming out party that includes a cock sucking contest. Told from the slave's pov. |
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Aug 10, 2006 |
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Nicely done account of a difficult day. Be true to yourself. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Aug 8, 2006 |
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Very nice work! A bit slow to build up, but the final scene was worth the read. As for codes, they're explained a bit in the writer's forum: The ones I'd give for this are MF/F, real, slow, consensual. Hope to see more of your stuff!
As for the real life info, I'm really sorry things didn't work out with your former partner. Just like all the other people in the world, there are good Doms and bad ones, and just like any bad breakup it shouldn't mean you have to give up what you enjoy. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Silk
(Edit) (Aug 8, 2006)
- Thank you Sir. Unfortunately, I never learned enough about the lifestyle to continue and am far too reserved to seek others in my area who could teach me. The story, as it is, was written because I am a writer and my Master wanted to challenge me. It took me most of a day to write it. Turning out something like this with specific guidelines and goals is fairly easy. I have a very vivid imagination. I'm glad you enjoyed the ending.
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