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Serving Her
Author: Wrt4ffun
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(Added on Aug 12, 2006)
(This month 48713 readers) (Total 57463 readers) |
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Essay and scenario |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
kinkcrazy
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Aug 14, 2006 |
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Very stream of consciousness with no set up or context. Couldn't get my attention (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Aug 13, 2006 |
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Obviously, even though just for fun, the author can write. The perfumed vision of a better world when ruled by women, is shattered rather abruptly when dear Mrs Thatcher springs to mind... but then, THIS is fiction, SHE was real.
All in all, a promising start, which makes me look forward to next installments... (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Aug 13, 2006 |
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You have major formatting issues which detract from any merit this "story" might have. There just didn't seem to be anything of any substance to this piece. (5/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 12, 2006 |
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my main problem with the story is that you used no codes for it nor did you offer any type of story ine to draw readers in, (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Millie
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Aug 12, 2006 |
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This was interesting, a totally different post from the norm. The two sections didn't, for me, meld together. A larger gap between the two would have shown the ending and beginning a little better.
I enjoyed the scenario the more of the two. It was a little clinical, but still definitely worth the read.
(7/10)
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