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Midieval times
Author: Shyloch
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(Added on Aug 19, 2006)
(This month 90050 readers) (Total 127923 readers) |
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A 17 year old girl is publicly tortured and executed because she insulted the princess. Graphic story. Cerntainly not for the squeamish. I apologise for my poor english. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
kicksnf
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Jun 14, 2011 |
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DISGUSTING !!! (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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Dec 20, 2006 |
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I wasn't quite sure what to grade this one - I'm giving it 8, as it does what it sets out to do very well, despite the fact that there are language issues. Unusually, I did not find the poor grammar got in the way of my enjoyment of the story, and I found the first half extremely erotic, although perhaps promising more than was delivered. One for sadists. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Aug 21, 2006 |
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As English is a second language, you did very well in communicating your ideas here. Quite a pleasant read. Too bad you took so much time away from your writing: I hope in the near future we might share more of your work. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lee Boudine
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Aug 20, 2006 |
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I enjoyed the preliminary part as Ruby pleaded with the count.
The latter part of the torture and execution was dead before the axe was swung to sever Ruby"s body.
If the count had led Ruby to degrade and defile herself to save her life in could have been very erotic, And when she has done everything he calls the executioner to pull her from his bed.
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Aug 20, 2006 |
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Yikes! That was one graphic story! Typos aside, it was well written. (7/10)
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