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Alice and the realm of spirits
Author: Cecilita
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(Added on Aug 19, 2006)
(This month 48722 readers) (Total 53540 readers) |
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A neighbor has prepared young Alice’s flat with camera connection so he secretly could see her in her nakedness and privacy. He exploit her believes in the spirit world and slowly by manipulation takes complete control of her mind and body and made her his obedient slave girl. To obey a man is natural for her, but where’s her own will and own decisions. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Reviewer:
25toLife
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Aug 22, 2006 |
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I was lost. While the idea is good, the fragments of information is really confusing. (6/10)
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Reviewer:
jip
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Aug 21, 2006 |
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Nice story. Looks promising for the rest... (9/10)
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Reviewer:
castle2001
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Aug 20, 2006 |
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While the English is stilted, the story line has promise. (8/10)
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