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Slave Hunters, Slave Preys
Author: Wolffie
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(Added on Sep 1, 2006)
(This month 68360 readers) (Total 93749 readers) |
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In a phantasmagorical tale of sexual slavery, a mysterious man, Wolff, a mysterious woman, Nikita, generic sheik, twin subs and even some celebrities come together in a story exploring submissive and dominant needs. The story starts off with a choreographed dance of dominance and submission between two strangers on a plane and moves on to unravel a sinister plot brewing in the bowels of that plane. It is surreal at times but it is not fantasy or a spoof. The scenes include the sacrament of a sadistic communion between the generic sheik and Catholic Girl, a female switch turned to slave, a pair of twins separated at birth, one who\'s Wolf\'s pet and the other, Nikita\'s slut. Just for fun, there are many references and allegories to pop culture. The intensity of events grows with each chapter. This tale stared out as a chain story written by me and Nikita. It\'s been seriously edited to smooth out seams between the sections and some segments have been amalgamated into a singe section. The first chapter was collaboration, the subsequent chapters were written by Wolffie, Nikita, and Wolffie. This series is a work in progress because our perverted imaginations take us to unknown destinations. We hope you enjoy the journey with us. |
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| Reviewer:
The_Trainer
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Oct 10, 2006 |
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High entertainment. I need to take some more airplane rides in the hopes of meeting Carleen. Both writers also in the story is an interesting note. I'd like to know the backstory. Looking forward to seeing more of your stuff. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
pejanon
(Edit) (Oct 15, 2006)
- Thank you! A 10! WOW!
It started with the simplest setting (two people meet on the plane) and kept developing.
Perhaps the backstory will find it's way into one of subsequent chapters....
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| Reviewer:
pttwyn
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Sep 6, 2006 |
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Thank You, I enjoy consensual slavegirl stories. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
pejanon
(Edit) (Sep 7, 2006)
- Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Sep 3, 2006 |
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I very much liked your story. You are a bit wordy but I think it works with your characters. And how fun for Carleen to be used by such interesting people. I look forward to reading more. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
pejanon
(Edit) (Sep 4, 2006)
- Thank you SO much! Wow!
Carleen has a twin sister and I hope you will enjoy that too.
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| Reviewer:
Mistress M
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Sep 2, 2006 |
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This is sizzling BDSM. Beginning with a couple of mysterious characters on an airplane, the story quickly moves to the adventurous beginnings of cruelty. The use of the authors own names in the story adds interest and I sincerely hope there will be more. There are a few spots where the seaming was evident but it didn't detract from the story. It seems that for one of you, English is not your first language. Work on it. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
pejanon
(Edit) (Sep 2, 2006)
- Wow! Thank you SO much!
You are right, English is not my first language. I am trying to make it 'colorful' a bit and be 'with' the character whose first language is also not English.
There ARE more chapters and they are being posted.
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| Reviewer:
Rabbit1
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Sep 1, 2006 |
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Wow two of my favorite witers team up ----Excellent story can not wait for more (9/10)
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- Replied by:
pejanon
(Edit) (Sep 2, 2006)
- thank you rabbit.
I am uplaoding more right now
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