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Natalie
Author: Koppite727
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(Added on Oct 9, 2006)
(This month 97823 readers) (Total 165777 readers) |
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a girl i knew in college, or wish i had known... |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Madsaint
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Oct 4, 2015 |
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One of my favourite femdom reads, loved it, with there was more to come. (10/10)
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notepad
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Dec 11, 2007 |
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i thought this story was written brilliantly - there is a slight problem with the spacing sometimes though
a really enjoyable story i hope it continues
the Mistresses are cruel and oh so sexy
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
EdgeSub_D
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May 20, 2007 |
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There's the slight issue still with the spacing, but besides that, the characters are very engaging, and I absolutely love the variety of cruel and unique tortures that you put him through. I actually have read this story a half dozen times... can't wait for an update! (9/10)
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egret72
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Nov 2, 2006 |
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Excellent story....we need MORE!!!! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
koppite727
(Edit) (Jan 12, 2007)
- i appreciate the very nice review, thanks! ! !
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| Reviewer:
colinuk
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Oct 22, 2006 |
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Loved it so much - read it twice. Cant wait to see where it goes to next. Keep up the cracking work! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
koppite727
(Edit) (Jan 12, 2007)
- Thanks Colin, hope you like the newest addition, more to come!
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| Reviewer:
slavephil
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Oct 20, 2006 |
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Not sure it could actually compete with published authors, but i have always loved your stuff and the way you write humiliation and Femdom is just hot, overall, in my opinion. And really cruel at times, too, but not so much so that i can't imagine wanting to be in the sub's place, either. Please keep up the humiliation and cruelty because little wimps, like me, deserve this kind of treatment from true Goddesses every once in a while.
Seriously, i love your work. Keep them coming cuz your imagination is fantastic and i always look to see if you have a new fic out.
phil (10/10)
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- Replied by:
koppite727
(Edit) (Oct 20, 2006)
- Phil, I promise!!! Thanks for your review, it keeps me from breaking under the pressure. sometimes its a million images i am trying to get onto paper and i have to go back over it many times, like a painter i guess.
I am posting part 3 today. hopefully they will have it up soon. they seem to have really improved the turn around time, (thanks to everyone at BDSM library for all of your work.)
if you have any ideas for how i could improve or better my writing, please drop me an email, thanks again for taking the time to review my story, its appreciated.
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slavephil
(Edit) (Aug 17, 2007)
- Please Update!! Like i said, i love your work. i want to know what Natalie does to this little loser. :)
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| Reviewer:
Mistress M
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Oct 10, 2006 |
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Oh my! It was a very funny story. The last paragraph had me guffawing as I pictured the scene. However, I came across many, many words that were joined together, without a space in between, and it distracted me from the reading. A spellchecker would catch those, otherwise, if they were intentional errors, you've got yourself quite a catchy technique to make your readers read a sentence over and over again. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
koppite727
(Edit) (Oct 10, 2006)
- it is an honor to make you laugh Mistress M :) i am sorry for the mashedtogetherwords. i am not sure if it was me or the way i uploaded it (using HTML file), since i did a spell check on the word doc and it didnt turn up aything. but then again i have a few versions on my computer, might be i uploaded an older one without the checks. but in anycase, thanks again for writing me back and i am so glad that you liked it. let me know if the next parts are enjoyable. it makes my day, thanks again!!
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| Reviewer:
sampit
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Oct 9, 2006 |
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great story. Can't wait for the next parts. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
koppite727
(Edit) (Oct 10, 2006)
- Thanks Sampit, its really nice of you to take the time to write! I am sending them the next part today, hope its up for you soon!!
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