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Aliquis in Moscow
Author: Aliquis
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(Added on Oct 13, 2006)
(This month 54748 readers) (Total 67773 readers) |
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A young guy get caught by Russian anti-spy agents by mistake and get tortured for some information. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
lil_threat
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Jan 15, 2009 |
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Just the kind of story I'm always looking for! I wish he really was a spy though... I hope to read more! (8/10)
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Longterm247
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Feb 1, 2007 |
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I liked this story, but wish that you'd gone into more detail with the torture of the genitals. Cutting them, milking them more and finishing with a castration scene.
Well it is to be continued, so maybe it will be as I say. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Oct 17, 2006 |
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Your character is a true masochist and I say this with admiration for the way you wrote it, he words you used, the dialogue. It's a good S/M story and a short, satisfying read, however, I agree with the previous reviewer about the typos. You should ask someone to edit your stories. (8/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Oct 14, 2006 |
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You have so many typos, I lost count of them! This takes away from any real promise this tale might have had. (5/10)
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