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Law and Order - Alternate End for ADA Borgia Author: Book of Evils
(Added on Nov 7, 2006) (This month 56886 readers) (Total 71069 readers)
ADA Borgia meets her death in a considerably worse fashion than shown for her TV series demise.

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Weighed Average (?): (5.5/10)
Average Rating: (5.5/10)
Highest Rating: (7/10)
Lowest Rating: (2/10)

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Reviewer: susankarl (Edit) Rating: Nov 13, 2006
I love stories of lovely women being ruthlessly tortured by depraved sadists, so obviously I enjoyed this gruesome killing.
It was perhaps a shame your two violent men did not show much ingenuity in their methods of causing pain to their lovely victim.
Perhaps the short time frame prevented more detailed ideas being expanded.
Of course there are many people who think such tales of cruelty are disgusting and can not believe we find pleasure in such evil phantasies, but then, does tickling some-one really make people come?
Thank goodness for variety.
It is pure unadulterated imaginary cruelty, relieves sexual tension, and is meant to be read in a safe site such as this only by those who enjoy such flights of fancy.
Send more of your stories, my friend, and many thanks for your kind comments about my Cellar story. Susan. (7/10)
Replied by: Book of Evils (Edit) (Nov 17, 2006)
Hello susankarl:
Me again. Thanks for the support and the rating. Your observation about the short time frame is entirely correct. These two guys were thugs, not very far up on the evolutionary scale and were under the gun, so as to say, to get the murder completed. They weren't supposed to enjoy killing her at all, as evidenced by how the 'Law and Order' writers scripted her demise. I mean, she was a fabulous looking woman and her clothes were barely mussed, talk about lost opportunities.
If you have a moment, take a gander at my latest effort, 'The Wasps'. I think it shows the ingenuity you have mentioned.
Thanks again for your reply.
Regards
BofE

Reviewer: Cagemaster1000 (Edit) Rating: Nov 9, 2006
A truly idiotic story, from an absolute amateur. (2/10)
Replied by: Book of Evils (Edit) (Nov 17, 2006)
Well, OK!
Judging from your poor command of English, as evidenced by your grammar and spelling in your first review, perhaps you failed to comprehend the nuances and finer points in my tale of ADA Borgia's woes.
Then too, the dilemma is, unless you read the story completely, through to the end, I don't believe you should be giving it such a low, derisive rating and if you hated it so much, why would you read it to the end. Sort of a catch twenty-two.
Anyhow, just confirms the infinite variety of Life's situations.
BofE

Reviewer: Mothbrad (Edit) Rating: Nov 7, 2006
Nice and violent story, but one not for the faint of heart. Some might find the misogyny a bit extreme, but not everything in this world can be PC and comfortable. There's also a lot of swearing, which is a bit unusual for this site, but I didn't find that too distressing. Keep it up! (7/10)
Replied by: Book of Evils (Edit) (Nov 10, 2006)
Hello Mothbrad:
Thanks for the encouragement. Quite obviously from the review after yours, not all readers share your approach or outlook. I believe the feedback guidelines call for constructive observations. Anyhow, I thank you again and actually have several postings, which were banned from another site as too violent, to offer to BDSM Library. I'd appreciate your input as they appear.
Also, if it weren't for taking a peek at the manner of feedback you leave, which is consistently helpful and supportive, I wouldn't have found the story "A Cellar Full of Screams" written in GB. What a fantastic, completely, over the top tale, penned by a genius. Maybe, someday, I can approach such an entertaining offering.
Regards

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