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Kelly\'s Come-uppance Author: Dr. Quirt
(Added on Nov 20, 2006) (This month 53791 readers) (Total 74126 readers)
A young prostitute offends the Drug Barons and suffers the consequences.

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Weighed Average (?): (5.5/10)
Average Rating: (6/10)
Highest Rating: (7/10)
Lowest Rating: (4/10)

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Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Dec 1, 2006
Although the story may not be enjoyable to some, I thought it a well-told tale and nicely done. More details would no-doubt be better, not to mention more fun *grin*; after all, that's part of why people read this genre. (7/10)

Reviewer: Mothbrad (Edit) Rating: Nov 29, 2006
I agree with susankarl, although think you def. deserve a pass mark because the story is well written and easy to read. I enjoyed what there was of it, but there was much potential for expansion, if you're interested in continuing/reworking. (6/10)

Reviewer: susankarl (Edit) Rating: Nov 23, 2006
A shame you get a reasonable story to justify having a victim in the hands of people who enjoy hurting her, then dispose of her in a passionless way.
Did the tormentors enjoy what they did ?
Was the girl raped ?
Did the woman who helped enjoy her actions or was she a mere employee ?
Is the torture chamber they have built for their own amusement or used to film victims for profitable sale ?
Questions I would have liked not having to ask.
Perhaps you would ezpand your story with the next young captive and let us know the answers.
Susan. (4/10)

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