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Revenge is a bitch (English)
Author: The Outsider
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(Added on Nov 20, 2006)
(This month 53768 readers) (Total 75315 readers) |
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The characters here are the same to the Hebrew story. However, I decided to start in a different way. In the Hebrew story I began with the end, and gave this version as a background. Here I will start with this and will go toward the end there. The results in both cases will be the same. So do not try to look for it in the Hebrew version of the story. This story will come in shorter chapters then usual because after the Nazi-type feedbacks that I received in my mail I decided that this is what I will do. |
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Apr 2, 2011 |
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I agree with mkemse. I went looking for the shortest stories on the site, and this was almost #1, with no part 2. (4/10)
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jip
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Dec 2, 2006 |
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Well, next time I wud suggest you wait longer before you publish. Then at least the reader will have something to read which is not the case now.
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SensoryOverlord
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Nov 28, 2006 |
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Who are you kidding? Your story codes list is almost longer than the 'story'. In which if you removed all the grammatical errors, there'd be nothing left! Please stick to hebrew, and spare us the slaughterhouse of your English writing. (1/10)
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Book of Evils
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Nov 22, 2006 |
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Whatever your native language, you would be far better off sticking to your writing aspirations using it ONLY.
You murder English.
It is an affront to authors who make serious efforts to entertain readers on this site, to be subjected to the kind of gibberish you have seen fit to post.
Nazi-type feed backs? Reminds me of the story about a husband and wife that when he drove everything was quiet and normal, and when she drove horns were honking every five minutes, and her observation was there are so many chauvinist drivers. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 22, 2006 |
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the first chapter has nothing to it it is only 2 paragraphs long, i hope it was not inteneded to be like this (4/10)
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