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The Long Embrace of Change
Author: Hymen Optera
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(Added on Dec 17, 2006)
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A young scientist is compelled, through drugs and hypnosis, to enthusiastically participate in his own feminization and subjugation. |
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| Reviewer:
wistan
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Excellent story, this. A really original spin on the "forced femme" idea. I rather liked the way the concept was introduced by referencing the parasitical wasps, though I did think that went on just a little too long - perhaps not quite so many examples.
The one flaw I found with it is that there really isn't a lot of character interaction. The scenes where the women issue instructions to the man are referenced but whilst we get one or two, they are often skipped over. I can see why the author made this choice, because it would be a bit like double dipping if we got long scenes of them telling him what to do and then long scenes of him doing it. However, as it is it means that the main characters never meet, and we never really get to see the owner exerting any real power or influence over the owned. I found that made the story a bit lacking.
However, I do recognise that this was more a conscious choice to tell the story in the way it is, not any kind of mistake. Overall I find this story very impressive and I think it's a shame it doesn't continue further. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
joythesub68
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Dec 31, 2006 |
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loved it, can't wait for more (10/10)
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misti_chaton
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Dec 19, 2006 |
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this is cool, i learned a lot. i can't wait to see what happens.
misti (10/10)
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mkemse
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Dec 18, 2006 |
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it was a intersting read, but not sure how realistic it was, but that is what famtasy is all about (7/10)
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trainmanretep
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Dec 18, 2006 |
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Interesting concept and a very good start. The only negative comment that I have was that I felt that part about the wasps, etc. was a bit long. I'm looking forward to seeing how this story develops. (7/10)
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