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Home Invasion Author: whisky
(Added on Jan 12, 2007) (This month 11204 readers) (Total 23319 readers)
A man\'s home may not be his castle

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Weighed Average (?): (6.5/10)
Average Rating: (6.5/10)
Highest Rating: (8/10)
Lowest Rating: (5/10)

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Reviewer: mirage (Edit) Rating: Oct 7, 2007
the bondage part later in the story is well done - very descriptive. "plain looking woman" - you should have a hot femme fatale. (7/10)

Reviewer: drain1478 (Edit) Rating: Apr 21, 2007
I really liked this story and I hope you continue to write more like it. (8/10)

Reviewer: jip (Edit) Rating: Jan 16, 2007
suspect the rest is following later? (6/10)

Reviewer: wistan (Edit) Rating: Jan 14, 2007
It's a bit hard to know what to make of this one. As a story in itself it's not really up to much; it's very short and to the point, which is no bad thing really, but the length means there is relatively little detail. It's just a stream of actions "she did this, then she did that, and before I knew it she the other..." If the point of this is to be a short story with a bondage theme, then it's not really very good. The author needs to take his (or her) time over the scene, describe it in more detail.
However, this does read a bit like the opening chapter of a longer story. If that's the idea, then the brevity of this part would be more acceptable and another point or two might be added to the score. (5/10)

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