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Bike Ride
Author: SG
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(Added on Jan 23, 2007)
(This month 64123 readers) (Total 75426 readers) |
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David goes for a ride with a few toys. Everything was going fine till he was discovered. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (7/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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Reviewer:
MISTRESS H
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Apr 16, 2008 |
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Well written, the story flowed from one thing to another, leaving the reader to want to get to the next line. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
hmverrrr
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Jan 27, 2007 |
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I thought it was well written and really enjoyed the subject matter - I love self bondage. How about a follow up ? (9/10)
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Reviewer:
MycroftXXXX
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Jan 24, 2007 |
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This is the second story by SG, and the problem is exactly the same. I like a lot of the concepts and ideas going into the story, but the short, choppy sentences just don't do them justice! (5/10)
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