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Site 59 Author: Rocky
(Added on Feb 13, 2007) (This month 58918 readers) (Total 72086 readers)
Here\'s another one from the dark recesses of my mind. At the height of the Cold War, a female soldier becomes enslaved by her supervisor. Flashbacks to her submission to her brother and others as a teen. Don\'t be turned off by the military theme...there\'s a lot of good ol\' nasty, wet sex involved, too!

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Reviewer: cala (Edit) Rating: Feb 15, 2007
The military themes are enjoyable, adding depth. A pity that formatting niggles blight some passages. I know this has been a continuing problem! Fingers crossed they can be resolved. (6/10)
Replied by: Rocky (Edit) (Feb 15, 2007)
Thanks, cala. I always appreciate your comments. Once again, I'm not seeing the formatting problem that some do, but it does seem to be a recurring problem. The only thing I noticed was that the line spacing seems to change at times.
Replied by: cala (Edit) (Feb 15, 2007)
I'm not seeing weird line spacing. But as before, some of your punctuation marks show as @, = and other strange oddments. Such distractions are a shame as your writing keeps improving!
Replied by: Rocky (Edit) (Feb 16, 2007)
I sure wish I knew what was going on with the weird punctuation, but the only thing I can suggest is to figure out what symbols are being substituted and do a find and replace to change it to the correct punctuation. That said, I'm surprised you think my writing is improving; I always thought my earlier works were better, and I admit to rushing the ending of this one.

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Feb 14, 2007
liked the concept ofthe WWII thmem but staying within 1 person and not the whole time frame (7/10)
Replied by: Rocky (Edit) (Feb 15, 2007)
Please clarify your comment, because I'm not sure what you mean. The story _is_ narrated by a single person. Also...this is post-WWII, actually the late 1970's to mid-1980's era.

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