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Honeymoon Squared
Author: Jethro Jodhpur
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(Added on Feb 27, 2007)
(This month 124654 readers) (Total 191630 readers) |
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Mom steps in for her frigid daughter on the honeymoon in order to save the marriage. This in turn leads to a series of revelations that show mother and daughter share equal responsibility for the situation. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
pharma
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Jul 23, 2016 |
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A good story, but as for me - it lacks some more extreme scenes.
I liked the fisting of cervix, and the incest with 14-year old girl. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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very enjoyable (8/10)
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- Replied by:
jethro jodhpur
(Edit) (Jan 27, 2009)
- Thanks for the encouragement. This story has a long way to go but opportunities to post new material are problematic based on the site's inactivity of recent weeks.
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| Reviewer:
ukMasterC
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Jul 27, 2008 |
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Brillian t so far - I look forward to reading the rest of it and any other work of yours. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jethro jodhpur
(Edit) (Aug 18, 2008)
- My apologies for not responding sooner to your most generous review. It is always a delight to hear from a reader, especially one who had enjoyed my material.
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Feb 27, 2007 |
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A nice start. Reads well, flows nicely. Premise is a bit of a stretch, only that a mother that experienced would be more likely to have educated her daughter at least a little. But I do look forward to her learning her lessions a bit late in life! A few more intense chapters could earn a higher rating. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
jethro jodhpur
(Edit) (Feb 28, 2007)
- Your review is most appreciated, especially its detail. In subsequent chapters the reason for Gwen's frigidity is slowly revealed, and the part that Roxy played in it comes to the fore. In my stories things are never what they appear to be, that's the fun in writing them.
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| Reviewer:
Panther007
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Feb 27, 2007 |
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A very nice start. Can't wait to see Roxy go to town on her daughter. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
jethro jodhpur
(Edit) (Feb 28, 2007)
- Thanks for the encouraging review, it is most appreciated. You will be getting your wish fulfilled very quickly and it's not just Roxy who is involved. This one has a relatively large cast of characters and they'll be revealed in subsequent chapters; stay tuned for the fun.
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