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I just want to be naked
Author: Nialla
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(Added on Mar 9, 2007)
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Based on actual experience, this puts into words the early sexual fantasy and reality of a 14 year old girl. Has anyone else ever felt like this ? Email me |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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HuManiMal
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Nov 7, 2011 |
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Short and very, very, sexy (though I was going to say sweet? Well, its that too!) Seems like a start, where is the rest? Could use some more details. (10/10)
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Doc_Odd
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Dec 11, 2008 |
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It is a bit short, but I really like the focus on the narrator's experiences. She talks about being an object for others, but really the others are just an anonymous mass there to fulfill her fantasies. More stories of exhibitionism and being used by strangers, please! (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Mar 13, 2007 |
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Short? Yes.. But wonderfully written and exquisitely erotic, so a well deserved double-digit from me...
I hope to see a lot of your writings, Nialla, they are simply perfect...
JJ (10/10)
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Elkor
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Mar 12, 2007 |
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I think the first chapter was truncated when posted? Needs more... (4/10)
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Skruddgemire
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Mar 12, 2007 |
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First chapter was a bit too short. Needed to be a bit further along before submitting. Good start however and I look forward to seeinf how it develops (6/10)
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ElectricBadger
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Mar 10, 2007 |
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Good start, seems very shore and ends abruptly though -- I hope to see more added in the future! (7/10)
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