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My family Author: tpesadist
(Added on Mar 13, 2007) (This month 69068 readers) (Total 86231 readers)
A story of family life under astrict father

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Reviewer: Rocky (Edit) Rating: Mar 15, 2007
It seems that English is not your native language, as there are a number of syntax errors in addition to the issues the previous reviewer mentioned. I would suggest finding someone to proofread your material before posting, as it does show promise and could be enjoyable if it were easier to read. (5/10)

Reviewer: daiquiri (Edit) Rating: Mar 14, 2007
Try paragraphs and sentences. (5/10)

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