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The Game
Author: Nialla
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(Added on Apr 6, 2007)
(This month 96343 readers) (Total 123774 readers) |
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Holly decides to act on her fantasies and takes the advice of her friend Vanessa to volunteer for a very, very painful game... |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7/10) |
Average
Rating: (7.5/10) |
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Reviewer:
mirage
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Oct 6, 2007 |
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not bad. I agree with the previous reviewers that the pace of the story is fast like the writer is hurrying toward something else. perhaps it's intended this way. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Apr 9, 2007 |
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Well written, though somewhat one demensional in the chosen torment. Exploring the reasons for her obsession as well as her reactions to it might help the pacing which I must agree seems a little quick. Perhaps a little more? (8/10)
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Reviewer:
chksng19
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Apr 9, 2007 |
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An interesting tale, though hurried. It deserves a sequel, and expansion to slow it a bit. Tales of other victims as well could be written. Good luck, and thanks for a good read! (7/10)
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