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Neighbor Girl
Author: Wiley Hunter
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(Added on May 11, 2007)
(This month 154952 readers) (Total 270023 readers) |
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A young girl discovers what she really likes, and it isn't unicorns and soft music in front of the fireplace. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 30, 2009 |
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Been following this on and off. Lost track after chapter 9 and to my delight, there's more content added since then. Must re-read the whole kaboodle, but there's still enough of the story in the back of my mind to remember that this is one of the best in its genre you'll come across.
Ugly, yet tastefull in its approach as in its descriptions. Highly erotic in the way the girls display their sexuality and their masochistic willingness to let them be treated the way the are.
Exquisite in the ruthlessnes of the 'Master', a ruthlessness that cannot exist without the submissiveness of the girls. Excellent portrayal of how the two intertwine, merge, become one.
Like I said, one of the best in it's genre.
Off to read the added chapters.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Battlefield Bob
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Aug 13, 2008 |
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Not much to say, just really good! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Battlefield Bob
(Edit) (Aug 14, 2008)
- Just wanted to add:
Very well written and and i can't stop reading it!
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jheller69
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Mar 18, 2008 |
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Can't wait to see whats instore for Amy next. (10/10)
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feathersword
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Jan 3, 2008 |
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Whilst not everything by this author I have enjoyed, this particular piece is exceptional. I really cannot think of any constructive criticism to offer and so I just wait with anticipation for each next installment. (10/10)
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feathersword
(Edit) (Jul 21, 2008)
- Oh happy day it is when, after so long, another chapter is added to this wonderful story.
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| Reviewer:
Tallguy333
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Dec 31, 2007 |
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Incredible story. I cant wait to see how the story will develope in the future. (10/10)
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ramses
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Dec 26, 2007 |
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Excellent story. The time jumps are a nice touch.
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Battlefield Bob
(Edit) (Aug 14, 2008)
- The time jumps are intresting but hard to keep track of.
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| Reviewer:
chromedome11
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Jul 31, 2007 |
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Very enjoyable. I'm looking forward to more chapters. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
kandyecaned
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Jul 10, 2007 |
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I was put off at first by the young age of the girl, but I just substituted her for me as I read the story and then it was fabulous. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Wiley Hunter
(Edit) (Jul 10, 2007)
- That's the spirit!
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| Reviewer:
takarada
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Jul 9, 2007 |
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Same style as Wiley06 from the mid 1990s
great story, hope there is more (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Wiley Hunter
(Edit) (Jul 10, 2007)
- Good eye.
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jul 7, 2007 |
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I'm glad you decided to skip forward. Chapters One and Four are the best to date. I like the best friend better than the neighbor guy. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bobanddianne
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Jun 27, 2007 |
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Neighbor Girl is truly fascinating in every regard. We eagerly look forward to the posting of each subsequent chapter.
You are an artisan with the erotic word.
-Bob & dianne-
(10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 13, 2007 |
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whi did i not have people like this in my neighborhood when I was growing up (7/10)
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