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The Facility
Author: DullRazor
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(Added on May 12, 2007)
(This month 67610 readers) (Total 82030 readers) |
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Fed up with the rat race that is the American business world, a young man decides to tour Europe. While in Russia, he is kidnapped by a radical faction of Russian intelligence, headed by a woman with a pension for rubber |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
tyjord
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Nov 18, 2010 |
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Excellent story. Very entertaining, with lots of great situations and predicaments for the main character. Very extreme, but in a good way. (9/10)
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James3572
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Jul 31, 2007 |
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This was by far the best extreme rubber story I have read in a very long time. It was so good I read it twice! The plot was fairly believable. The descriptions were awesome, I almost felt I was there. The extreme water sports was interesting if a little bit on the extreme side for my tastes. This story could go in so many directions. I hope you don't get rid of the contest idea though. I thought that idea was awesome. I can't wait for the further adventures of the Mistress, Madam Anzhela and Matt aka slave #L1-018 soon. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
sissymaid
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May 22, 2007 |
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good story but i did keep getting los tin all the fine detail.i look forward to the next chapter.
ps,were is this plac ein russian,i want to go,lol. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mark Jones
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May 14, 2007 |
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Good story with interesting ideas. I like rubber stories and this doesn't disappoint. One thing though; The word you are looking for is 'penchant' not 'pension'. (7/10)
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azrlg17
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May 13, 2007 |
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Interesting concept. Some nice sex. Believable characters.
But if you have story where you are abducting 6 times a year 30-35 Americans and making them disappear forever, having permanent almost indestructible computer controlled rubber suits, a cure for caries, permanent hair removal, prinkazons,... surely requires a scifi label.
Grammar and spelling are OK. (7/10)
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