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Cyber Stalker
Author: HGZero
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(Added on May 15, 2007)
(This month 59049 readers) (Total 69185 readers) |
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You've done it before. You've googled a name. Checked out the Myspace. Read a LiveJournal or two. This story is inspired by all those bits of info we put out there. We bear our souls for a little attention and forget that it might be there years later. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 30, 2009 |
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As a reader of erotic fiction, you have to go through a lot of crap. Luckily, once in a while, there's a story that sticks out.
"Cyber Stalker" is such a story. Because of its inventiveness and fresh approach, because of the pace and the characterizations.
All you can do as a reader, is thank the author and hope he/she will continue writing and posting.
Thank you, HGZero.
JJ
(10/10)
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retsam6
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May 18, 2007 |
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Really enjoyed this story and its hard waiting for the next!! Hopefully he will have her perform on webcam! (10/10)
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sunnykub
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May 18, 2007 |
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Very naughty... i can't wait to read more. This sounds like every shy slaves dream (those who aren't owned that is). i do hope that you'll see fit to share more of this story with us. (9/10)
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Mad Lews
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May 18, 2007 |
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Oh Yeah! A nice little twist and imaginative too.
While the author’s knowledge of cyber and phone sex is probably due to hours of arduous research I want to be the first assure the writer that all that effort paid off. I’ll be looking forward to more of this or any other story by the esteemed HGZero.
(10/10)
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slvWriting
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May 17, 2007 |
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Very nice, very very nice. It was a very good story, that I hope you'll continue, because you've left me wanting to read some more. The only reason I'm not giving out a higher score is because I found a couple of errors, like "what with" instead of "with what" as it should have been and a "though" that should have been "through", just a typo I guess.
Keep up the good work, and please do continue this story!! (8/10)
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mr_slogan
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May 17, 2007 |
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Very well written. Great style. I look forward to reading more. (9/10)
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Sam Blythe
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May 16, 2007 |
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Good job. Looking forward to your next update. I like the sense of anticipation and mystery about what's going to happen next. (9/10)
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Masterdarkone2000
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May 16, 2007 |
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Great Story... I look forward to seeing what you will do with the story. Keep up the OUTSTANDING work.
(10/10)
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rope_monkey
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May 16, 2007 |
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good pacing, and I really like the 'chatlog' approach to telling the characters' online interactions. Looking forward to next chapter! (9/10)
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sub61
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May 16, 2007 |
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I really enjoyed this....I can't wait to read the continuation!! (9/10)
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C_Lakewood
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May 16, 2007 |
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This is a good one. It begins a little slowly,
but that's because the author takes the trouble
to set the stage and to tell us some things about
the two major characters. Part 1 ends with a
scene that is both hot and clever. So far it
is well-crafted and cleanly written (except for
a few grammatical errors). The only major fault
is that I think the narrator's stalk is too easy;
plausibility would have been improved if there
had been one or more difficulties to overcome.
I have given it an 8, but I can always come back
and revise this score. I do look forward to
further parts.
(8/10)
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chksng19
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May 16, 2007 |
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A lovely piece, full of promise and the opportunity to continue to tease and please. Nicely written! (9/10)
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