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Morning Play
Author: jack
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(Added on May 22, 2007)
(This month 50164 readers) (Total 61701 readers) |
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A couple very much in love play in their special way. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 31, 2007 |
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hot well eritten and laiad out and thought out (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
aweta69
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May 25, 2007 |
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I would like to see the story continue. The start read well and there was thought in its content and how the opening was painted. I could see this evolving into more of a romance that let the reader see and feel the many stages that this could be played on.
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- Replied by:
electrik2002
(Edit) (May 25, 2007)
- Thank you for your review. Since this story is non-fiction, I'll just have to see how events unfold. As they do, I'll plan to write more. Have a nice weekend!
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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May 23, 2007 |
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I really enjoyed reading 'Morning Play'. It was short but was not lacking. I love how it was so matter of fact. To me that made it more sensual and romantic. Every girl could use a guy like that ! I look forward to reading more of your work. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
electrik2002
(Edit) (May 23, 2007)
- Thanks for your comments. The story is semi-autobiographical. I say “semi” because at the time I wrote it, my ex and I had children in the house, so I never really got around to building the “Chair”. It would have looked a bit out of place amid the kids’ toys in our bedroom. :) Otherwise, the story is entirely factual; the events described took place in one manner or another on a fairly regular basis. Also, I meant the tale to be romantic. I wrote it as a love story.
BTW, there’s another of my stories on this site. Also semi-autobiographical, it’s titled “What He Needed”. I’d be very interested to hear your comments on it. Thanks again.
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| Reviewer:
sirbor
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May 23, 2007 |
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Another great story! Keep up the good work. (9/10)
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somewriter
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May 22, 2007 |
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Good story, but teasingly short! (9/10)
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